New California Republic - Revision history

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Ahbob: Reverted edits by Ubudijog (Talk) to last revision by Janusz2238

2010-11-24T02:29:23Z

Reverted edits by Ubudijog (Talk) to last revision by Janusz2238

Ubudijog at 01:22, 24 November 2010

2010-11-24T01:22:38Z

Janusz2238 at 18:40, 13 August 2010

2010-08-13T18:40:13Z

Izual at 10:47, 14 July 2010

2010-07-14T10:47:01Z

Izual: moved New California Republic (state) to New California Republic

2010-07-14T10:34:30Z

moved New California Republic (state) to New California Republic

Crysis at 13:27, 15 May 2010

2010-05-15T13:27:51Z

Izual at 19:40, 16 January 2010

2010-01-16T19:40:30Z

Izual at 14:09, 8 January 2010

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 [[File:NCR_Flag.png|thumb|The official NCR's Flag, featuring the two-headed bear...]]
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-|align="center"|''Â« NCR has outlawed [[slavery]] in their territories, have one of the best and largest standing armies in the wastes, and have benefited under their current President, Tandi, who has been with the Republic since she was a young girl in Shady Sands. On the plus side, the NCR has attempted to bring civilization and law back to the wasteland, and they don't (openly) discriminate against ghouls and mutants. Â»''
+|align="center"|''Â« NCR has outlawed [[slavery]] in their territories, has one of the best and largest standing armies in the wastes, and has benefited under their current President, Tandi, who has been with the Republic since she was a young girl in Shady Sands. On the plus side, the NCR has attempted to bring civilization and law back to the wasteland, and they don't (openly) discriminate against ghouls and mutants. Â»''
 - From [[Chris Avellone]]'s [http://www.duckandcover.cx/content.php?id=74 Fallout Bible, part 6].''
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-The '''New California Republic''' ('''NCR''') is a federation of towns in California. In [[FOnline: 2238]], this federations is located on the southern part of the [[worldmap]]. Its capital is [[Shady Sands]], with 3000+ inhabitants. In the year [[2238]], the population of the state is about 700,000 people. The NCR state maintains the largest standing army in the [[Fallout]] world.
+The '''New California Republic''' ('''NCR''') is a federation of towns in California. In [[FOnline: 2238]], this federation is located on the southern part of the [[world map]]. Its capital is [[Shady Sands]], with 3000+ inhabitants. In the year [[2238]], the population of the state is about 700,000 people. The NCR state maintains the largest standing army in the [[Fallout]] world.
 == Towns in the federation ==
 [[File:NCR flag.jpg|thumb|The official flag of the New California Republic, waving in the wind!]]
-The following towns are included in the New California Republic. They receive economic help as well as [[Rangers]] reinforcements when they need it ; their global policy is also shared. All of them are [[guarded cities]].
+The following towns are included in the New California Republic. They receive economic help as well as [[Rangers|Ranger]] reinforcements when they need it; their global policy is also shared. All of them are [[guarded cities]].
-* [[Shady Sands]] (capital) ;
+* [[Shady Sands]] (capital)
-* The [[Hub]].
+* The [[Hub]]
 == Power ==
-The strength of the New California Republic is mainly its manpower. With 700,000 citizens, the state has also a large manpower, superior to [[Enclave]]'s one or the [[Brotherhood of Steel]]'s one, and even to [[Vault City]] or [[Raiders]] forces. Since the Republic includes a powerful town like [[the Hub]], and as its capital is a trading town, NCR's army has no problems to find weapons or armors for its soldiers.
+The strength of the New California Republic is mainly its manpower. With 700,000 citizens, the state has a large manpower, superior to that of the [[Enclave]] or the [[Brotherhood of Steel]], and even to [[Vault City]] or [[Raiders|Raider]] forces. Since the Republic includes a powerful town like [[the Hub]], and since its capital is a trading town, NCR's army has no problems finding weapons or armors for its soldiers.
 === Police forces ===
-NCR's army is not supposed to keep peace inside the federation's towns, so each town have to make its own police force. However, the [[Rangers]] can make a good intervention force, if a serious battle happens somewhere. They are quick and well trained, as they are the elite force of the state. They are said to have numerous safehouses throughout the [[worldmap]], and they use these to strike at slavers or outlaws anywhere.
+NCR's army is not supposed to keep peace inside the federation's towns, so each town have to make its own police force. However, the [[Rangers]] can make a good intervention force, if a serious battle happens somewhere. They are quick and well-trained, as they are the elite force of the state. They are said to have numerous bases throughout California, and they use these to strike slavers or outlaws anywhere.
 === Economy ===
-The New California Republic is mainly growing thanks to the commitments of its citizens, but as it is covering a large part of the southern California, a lot of merchants and caravans have to trade in this area. NCR is receiving a part of this wealth travelling across the wastes.
+The New California Republic is mainly growing thanks to the commitments of its citizens, but as it is covering a large part of the southern California, a lot of merchants and caravans have to trade in this area. NCR is receiving a part of this wealth that is traveling across the wastes.
 [[Category:New California Republic]]
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 == Power ==
-The [[strength]] of the New California Republic is mainly its manpower. With 700,000 citizens, the state has also a large manpower, superior to [[Enclave]]'s one or the [[Brotherhood of Steel]]'s one, and even to [[Vault City]] or [[Raiders]] forces. Since the Republic includes a powerful town like [[the Hub]], and as its capital is a trading town, NCR's army has no problems to find weapons or armors for its soldiers.
+The strength of the New California Republic is mainly its manpower. With 700,000 citizens, the state has also a large manpower, superior to [[Enclave]]'s one or the [[Brotherhood of Steel]]'s one, and even to [[Vault City]] or [[Raiders]] forces. Since the Republic includes a powerful town like [[the Hub]], and as its capital is a trading town, NCR's army has no problems to find weapons or armors for its soldiers.
 === Police forces ===

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 [[File:NCR_Flag.png|thumb|The official NCR's Flag, featuring the two-headed bear...]]
-{|width=&quot;80%&quot; align=&quot;center&quot;
+{|width="80%" align="center"
-|align=&quot;center&quot;|''Â« NCR has outlawed [[slavery]] in their territories, have one of the best and largest standing armies in the wastes, and have benefited under their current President, Tandi, who has been with the Republic since she was a young girl in Shady Sands. On the plus side, the NCR has attempted to bring civilization and law back to the wasteland, and they don't (openly) discriminate against ghouls and mutants. Â»''
+|align="center"|''Â« NCR has outlawed [[slavery]] in their territories, have one of the best and largest standing armies in the wastes, and have benefited under their current President, Tandi, who has been with the Republic since she was a young girl in Shady Sands. On the plus side, the NCR has attempted to bring civilization and law back to the wasteland, and they don't (openly) discriminate against ghouls and mutants. Â»''
 - From [[Chris Avellone]]'s [http://www.duckandcover.cx/content.php?id=74 Fallout Bible, part 6].''

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 [[File:NCR_Flag.png|thumb|The official NCR's Flag, featuring the two-headed bear...]]
-{|width="80%" align="center"
+{|width=&quot;80%&quot; align=&quot;center&quot;
-|align="center"|''Â« NCR has outlawed [[slavery]] in their territories, have one of the best and largest standing armies in the wastes, and have benefited under their current President, Tandi, who has been with the Republic since she was a young girl in Shady Sands. On the plus side, the NCR has attempted to bring civilization and law back to the wasteland, and they don't (openly) discriminate against ghouls and mutants. Â»''
+|align=&quot;center&quot;|''Â« NCR has outlawed [[slavery]] in their territories, have one of the best and largest standing armies in the wastes, and have benefited under their current President, Tandi, who has been with the Republic since she was a young girl in Shady Sands. On the plus side, the NCR has attempted to bring civilization and law back to the wasteland, and they don't (openly) discriminate against ghouls and mutants. Â»''
 - From [[Chris Avellone]]'s [http://www.duckandcover.cx/content.php?id=74 Fallout Bible, part 6].''

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 = Power =
-The strenght of the NCR state is mainly its manpower. With 700,000 citizens, the state has also a large manpower, superior to [[Enclave]]'s one or the [[Brotherhood of Steel]]'s one, and even to [[Vault City]] or [[Raiders]] army. Since the federation contains a powerful town like [[NCR]], and as this is a trading town, NCR's army has no problems to find weapons or armors for its soldiers.
+The [[strength]] of the NCR state is mainly its manpower. With 700,000 citizens, the state has also a large manpower, superior to [[Enclave]]'s one or the [[Brotherhood of Steel]]'s one, and even to [[Vault City]] or [[Raiders]] army. Since the federation contains a powerful town like [[NCR]], and as this is a trading town, NCR's army has no problems to find weapons or armors for its soldiers.
 = Police forces =

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 You can visit the following towns, that are part of the NCR state :
 * [[NCR]] (capital) ;
 = Power =
-The strenght of the NCR state is mainly its manpower. With 700,000 citizens, the state has also a large manpower, superior to [[Enclave]]'s one or the [[Brotherhood of Steel]]'s one, and even to [[Vault City]] or [[Raiders]] army. Since the federation contains powerful towns like [[NCR]], and as those ones are trading towns, NCR's army has no problems to find weapons or armors for its soldiers.
+The strenght of the NCR state is mainly its manpower. With 700,000 citizens, the state has also a large manpower, superior to [[Enclave]]'s one or the [[Brotherhood of Steel]]'s one, and even to [[Vault City]] or [[Raiders]] army. Since the federation contains a powerful town like [[NCR]], and as this is a trading town, NCR's army has no problems to find weapons or armors for its soldiers.
 = Police forces =