Vault City - Revision history

Ronillon: link

2013-04-23T15:00:23Z

link

Marko: link to Barkus plus numerous spelling/grammar changes

2013-02-13T19:36:31Z

link to Barkus plus numerous spelling/grammar changes

Ronillon: /* Courtyard */ link correction

2012-09-12T19:27:16Z

‎Courtyard: link correction

Balthasar at 17:20, 10 May 2012

2012-05-10T17:20:37Z

Ronillon: /* Courtyard */ Add: links

2011-12-30T03:43:57Z

‎Courtyard: Add: links

Ronillon: /* The Inner City */ '''Citizenship''' clarification and links

2011-08-10T10:47:13Z

‎The Inner City: '''Citizenship''' clarification and links

Mudguts: /* Description */ spelling/ grammar/ random adds

2010-12-06T14:07:36Z

‎Description: spelling/ grammar/ random adds

Ronillon: Add: Headquarters underground levels info

2010-12-03T13:31:43Z

Add: Headquarters underground levels info

Ahbob: Reverted edits by Ubudijog (Talk) to last revision by Ahbob

2010-11-24T02:27:51Z

Reverted edits by Ubudijog (Talk) to last revision by Ahbob

Ubudijog at 01:23, 24 November 2010

2010-11-24T01:23:02Z

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 Despite its size, the city boasts sophisticated technology. Apart from the NCR, Shi, Brotherhood, or the Enclave, they're the most advanced faction in the wasteland. They possess cutting edge medical technology, allowing them to mass produce medical supplies and chems (such as Stimpaks) as well as perform radiation removal treatments and sophisticated surgical procedures, including replacement of lost limbs and organs via cloning and grafting armor plating to one's skeleton. Aside from medical technology, they also control an advanced military force, with all guards and patrolmen rigorously trained and equipped with advanced weapons and armor.
-The city Council rules in a completely authoritarian way, controlling every aspect of life within the City. Their regulations are strict and enforced to the full extent of the law. For instance, no drugs, real alcohol (artificial imitations are legal), prostitution, gambling or any other vices are allowed within the inner city. All citizens found breaching any regulations, be it even badmouthing the First Citizen, are usually swiftly incarcerated and reeducated. Its population is strictly regulated, with all pregnancies scheduled and insemination performed by the Vault's autodoc.
+The city Council rules in a completely authoritarian way, controlling every aspect of life within the City. Their regulations are strict and enforced to the full extent of the law. For instance, no drugs, real [[alcohol]] (artificial imitations are legal), prostitution, gambling or any other vices are allowed within the inner city. All citizens found breaching any regulations, be it even badmouthing the First Citizen, are usually swiftly incarcerated and reeducated. Its population is strictly regulated, with all pregnancies scheduled and insemination performed by the Vault's autodoc.
 Most of the Citizens are extremely bigoted, hypocritical and arrogant, treating outsiders like dirt and leading boring, conformist lives, content with the state of affairs. Although healthy and very well educated, they are also extremely dull and bland, with little to no concern for the outside world. Many do not even venture beyond the protective walls of the City proper.

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 == Description ==
-Vault City is a very small but high tech settlement. It is small compared to the hundreds of residents that lived in Redding or Broken Hills.
+Vault City is a very small but high tech settlement. It is small compared to the hundreds of residents that lived in [[Redding]] or [[Broken Hills]].
 Despite its size, the city boasts sophisticated technology. Apart from the NCR, Shi, Brotherhood, or the Enclave, they're the most advanced faction in the wasteland. They possess cutting edge medical technology, allowing them to mass produce medical supplies and chems (such as Stimpaks) as well as perform radiation removal treatments and sophisticated surgical procedures, including replacement of lost limbs and organs via cloning and grafting armor plating to one's skeleton. Aside from medical technology, they also control an advanced military force, with all guards and patrolmen rigorously trained and equipped with advanced weapons and armor.
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 [[File:VCentrance.jpg|thumb|The outer entrance of Vault City]]
-This area belongs to Vault City but most of the inhabitants there are no citizens themselves. Most of them are refugees and people who just settled here to take advantage of the protection the city offers them. Some of them also try to do some business there. Theres a small general store, a doctor and a little bar.
+This area belongs to Vault City but most of the inhabitants there are no citizens themselves. Most of them are refugees and people who just settled here to take advantage of the protection the city offers them. Some of them also try to do some business there. There's a small general store, a doctor and a little bar.
 === The Inner City ===
-In the inner city you can find many services, merchants and special medical support. Also there are two bars but they only sell synthetic alcohol as the directive of Vault City forbits the consumtion of real alcohol.
+In the inner city you can find many services, merchants and special medical support. Also there are two bars but they only sell synthetic alcohol as the directive of Vault City forbids the consumption of real alcohol.
 Maybe the most important buildings are the Council and the Headquarters of Vault City.
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 [[File:Inner City.jpg|thumb|The entrance to the inner city of Vault City]]
-Beside that theres the ''Corrections Center'', led by Seargent Stark, where citizens, who act against the law will be imprisoned, the ''Servent Allocation Center'', where citizens can buy servants for their own purposes and the ''Information Center'', providing lecture of all kinds of sciencetific importance.
+Beside that there's the ''Corrections Center'', led by Sargent Stark, where citizens, who act against the law will be imprisoned, the ''Servant Allocation Center'' with [[Barkus]], where citizens can buy servants for their own purposes and the ''Information Center'', providing lecture of all kinds of scientific importance.
 '''Citizenship'''
-Becoming a citizen of Vault City isn't easy. Normaly you can only get the citizen status if you were born as one. But as most aspects of live got some little backdoors there's also one here too.
+Becoming a citizen of Vault City isn't easy. Normally you can only get the citizen status if you were born as one. But as most aspects of life have some little back doors, there's also one here.
-You might try to go to the gate to the inner city. And [[Talk to the guard to be able to join Vault City]]. If you meet requirements and are convincing enough, some of his conversation options allow you to immediatly become a member of [[Vault City faction]] and thus gain a citizen status. In other cases he maybe will give you the opportunity to do some job for him. As exchange for that you will gain the status of a citizen with all privileges and consequences.
+You might try to go to the gate to the inner city. And [[Talk to the guard to be able to join Vault City]]. If you meet requirements and are convincing enough, some of his conversation options allow you to immediately become a member of [[Vault City faction]] and thus gain a citizen status. In other cases he maybe will give you the opportunity to do some job for him. As exchange for that you will gain the status of a citizen with all privileges and consequences.
 '''Note:''' Beware, This will automatically remove you as a member from any player factions you are a part of.
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 [[File:Vault8.jpg|thumb|The entrance of Vault 8]]
-''Vault 8'' was one of the Vaults that survived the War and the time after. For about 13 years the inhabitants of this small secure piece of earth lived there and hoped that finaly some sign would signalise them, that they could get outside again and build up a new world. Finaly it came and the rest is history.
+''Vault 8'' was one of the Vaults that survived the War and the time after. For about 13 years the inhabitants of this small secure piece of earth lived there and hoped that finally some sign would alert them that they could get outside again and build up a new world. Finally it came and the rest is history.
-Nowadays the vault isnt frequented by people that much. Here you can find the main computer where you have access to all the information that was saved before and after the vault was opened. Also there is the medical headquarter of the city, led by doctor Troy and his assistant.
+Nowadays the vault isn't frequented by people that much. Here you can find the main computer where you have access to all the information that was saved before and after the vault was opened. Also there is the medical headquarter of the city, led by doctor Troy and his assistant.
 == Activities ==

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 ==== Courtyard ====
-* The [[shit shoveling]] can be done there like in most cities. Above the entrance to the courtyard there's a little brahmin stable. You can find ''[[Ed the Brahmin]]'' trader there, who also plays some role in a [[quest]] of [[Modoc]].
+* The [[shit shoveling]] can be done there like in most cities. Above the entrance to the courtyard there's a little brahmin stable. You can find ''[[Ed, the Brahmin Dealer]]'' trader there, who also plays some role in a [[quest]] of [[Modoc]].
 *At the ''[[Happy Harrys]]'', a small general store, you can buy several things such as [[weapons]], [[ammunition]] and [[items]].
 *[["Doc" Andrew]], next to Happy Harrys can give you the [[doctor profession]] up to level 2 and sells medical kits.

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 ==== Vault 8 ====
 * Here you can find the ''Nurse Phyllis'', who sells you Bio Med Gel.
 == See also ==

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 ==== Courtyard ====
-* The [[shit shoveling]] can be done there like in most cities. Above the entrance to the courtyard there's a little brahmin stable. You can find ''Ed the Brahmin'' trader there, who also plays some role in a [[quest]] of Modoc.
+* The [[shit shoveling]] can be done there like in most cities. Above the entrance to the courtyard there's a little brahmin stable. You can find ''[[Ed the Brahmin]]'' trader there, who also plays some role in a [[quest]] of [[Modoc]].
-*At the ''Happy Harrys'', a small general store, you can buy several things such as weapons, ammunition and items.
+*At the ''[[Happy Harrys]]'', a small general store, you can buy several things such as [[weapons]], [[ammunition]] and [[items]].
-*The doctor, next to Happy Harrys can give you the doctor profession up to level 2 and sells medical kits.
+*[["Doc" Andrew]], next to Happy Harrys can give you the [[doctor profession]] up to level 2 and sells medical kits.
 *At the bar next to the doctors house you can buy beer and booze.
-*Theres also a workbench inside the house next to the brahmin stable .
+*Theres also a [[workbench]] inside the house next to the brahmin stable .
 ==== Inner City ====

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 '''Citizenship'''
-Becoming a citizen of Vault City isn't easy. Normaly you can only get the citizen status if you were born as one. But as most aspects of live got some little backdoors there's also one here too. There is a guard at the gate to the inner city. If you speak to him he maybe will give you the opportunity to do some job for him. As exchange for that you will gain the status of a citizen with all privileges and consequences.
+Becoming a citizen of Vault City isn't easy. Normaly you can only get the citizen status if you were born as one. But as most aspects of live got some little backdoors there's also one here too.
-Beware, some of his conversation options allow you to immediatly become a citizen if you are convincing enough. This will automatically remove you as a member from any player factions you are a part of.
 === The Vault ===

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 Maybe the most important buildings are the Council and the Headquarters of Vault City.
 The ''Council'' is the political institution of the city. It regulates all aspects of the
-everyday life of its citizens and determines the role, which Vault City plays in foreign affairs. Within the ''Headquarters'' you can find the executive part of the city. It's the place where the guards are trained and military operations are planned.
+everyday life of its citizens and determines the role, which Vault City plays in foreign affairs. Within the ''Headquarters'' you can find the executive part of the city. It's the place where the guards are trained and military operations are planned. <br>
 [[File:Inner City.jpg|thumb|The entrance to the inner city of Vault City]]

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